Wednesday, April 24, 2013

Romeo and Juliet Outline


Paragraph 1: Introduction

Lead: In, “Romeo and Juliet” by William Shakespeare, two young cross-star lovers experience through a lot of things that in the end ended their lives.

Thesis: Romeo’s spontaneous lead to Juliet and his tragic death.
                                                          
Paragraph 2: Romeo marry Juliet not caring about anything else

            Ex: “These violent delights have violent ends”(Act 2, sc.5) – Friar Lawrence tried telling Romeo to reconsider this marriage, but apparently Romeo did not care because he is too in love with Juliet.
            Ex: “Ah, Juliet, if the measure of thy joy/Be heap'd like mine and that thy skill be more…” (Act 2, sc.5) – Romeo really loves Juliet by saying that she is his joy and that she is his happiness.

Paragraph 3: Romeo killed Tybalt as a result of Mercutio’s death.

            Ex: “O, I am Fortune’s fool!” (Act 3, sc.1) – Romeo feels foolish because he had kill Juliet’s cousin.
            Ex: “Staying for thine to keep him company/Either thou, or I, or both, must go with him.”(Act 3, sc1)- Romeo is really angry at Tybalt for killing Mercutio and he wanted him to die.

Paragraph 4: Romeo dies for Juliet without thinking that Juliet will eventually wake up after 48hrs.

            Ex: “Then I defy you, stars” (Act 5, sc.1) – Romeo feels sad to find that Juliet is dead and commit suicide himself.
            Ex: “Well, Juliet, I will lie with thee tonight” (Act 5, sc.1) – Romeo is going to kill himself, because he doesn’t want to live if Juliet is not alive.

Paragraph 5: Conclusion

            Restate Thesis: Romeo’s spontaneous lead to Juliet and his tragic death.

            -If Romeo had thought about things before he do them, maybe Mercutio and Tybalt wouldn’t die
            - If Romeo had listen to Fiar Lawrence, then maybe Juliet wouldn’t have to fake die and then ended up “real dying”
            -If Romeo had waited for Fiar Lawrence to come and brought him the news that Juliet is fake dying, Romeo wouldn’t have to real die and Juliet wouldn’t either. 

Friday, April 19, 2013

Extra Credit Reading Response


Title: The Woods Were Tossing with Jewels
By: Marie St. John

Recently I had just finished reading “The Woods Were Tossing with Jewels” by Marie St. John. The whole story has described the migratory life of a farmer’s family at the beginning of the 20th century through the eyes of a girl of five years old Firstly, I think that the word “Jewels” in the title “The Woods Were Tossing with Jewels” have a lot of meanings to it. There are four implied meanings of “Jewels”: 

(1) The jewels stand for the happy life and enjoyment which happened in the woods.
(2) The jewels stand for the dedicate love among the members of such a big family and the harmonious life in the joint family.
(3) The growth of children likes jewels which were flashing in the woods.
(4) The jewels stand for the spirits of the father.

 I would like to talk about the understanding of this story on my own and explain why the jewels represented such four meanings I have mentioned above. The story started in 1899, when the century its turn. It was also the time when the American westward movement was gradually coming to an end. The American westward movement which had lasted a century more or less had an import impact on the formation and development of the American national spirit. It developed the American political and social awareness of democracy, especially cultivated the "American-style freedom, equality and competition", which had created the American spirits of audacity, adventure and the pursuit of wealth.

The father of this little five-year-old girl was affected by this. So the father was a man with an urge for adventure and independence. He made the decision to take his family to the southern tip of Florida where he staked a claim on one of the offshore islands. It did not mean the family had a bad living condition before this migration. Actually, they lived a comfortable life in palmetto. The father just wanted his children to have richer food and gave them a taste of the way he grew up, which could see the father was proud of his adventurous life he had experienced.  For the little girl and the whole family, this migration was full of interests and stimulation. Through the author’s descriptions, we did not see fear and dismay. Instead, what we actually saw was her the joy over the beautiful trees, flowers and birds in abundance, the excitement during the fishing tours, the happy memory of the “sumptuous” dinner table and the birth of a new baby. Nevertheless, there were also some misfortunes occurred to the author’s family, such as the bad living condition at first, the bully’s oppression. These unhappy and simple experiences were ended finally, which also made the author and her family cherish the time they lived in the woods still further. What’s more, after the family’s living condition became stable, the author’s grandmother, father’s little brother, and uncle were all moving to live with the family. The big families were living together in a friendly way, caring and understanding each other deeply. These admirable relationships like jewels which were shining in the woods.

Joy, vitality and care which happened in this big joint-undivided family have big influences to everything which was attached to the woods. Both the joy enjoyed in the woods and the happy life living in the big family was shining like jewels in the eyes of the little five-year-old girl. Then, what must be mentioned during their adventure was the guy--Edgar Watson, the infamous outlaw. Watson moved from Oklahoma to the Florida Everglades and built a sugar cane plantation in the late 1800's. It was thought that he murdered several of his hired hands who demanded pay for their work.  The author’s father was a man who lived with a heart of gold, a will of iron. Protecting the whole family from hurts which come from the animal and the people is the father’s most important task. Therefore, when Watson did not give the father full money agreed on, the father’s inside adventurous spirit led him not to bow his head to that guy. He went to meet Watson without gun, and finally took the money back which belonged to their whole family’s hard working.

The father’s spirits of leader took important roles in family and like jewels which were shining. Also, this matter showed that the father’s purpose had been brought about. As I mentioned above, Father’s purpose was to farm this island but behind this it was his wish to give children a taste of the way he grew up. When the bully, Watson raised a pistol and wanted to shoot father, he saw two boys in the boat, each with a rifle held in small, capable hands and bead drawn down on the man who threatened their father. Children have grown up. They began to care about their father and even could protect their father. The most important is that the children inherited the firm and indomitable characters, which their father had held in heart all his life. Obviously, the growth of the kids would be the brightest jewels for the whole family.

       In all, the story show us why more than seventy years later the author is still so nostalgic about that hard and simple life the family once lived. We could feel the author’s praise, and missing to her father, her enjoyable big family, including her admire to her father. We could also learn from the article that we should treat our life in positive, aggressive, passionate attitude. We should care more about our family than ourselves and regard protecting our family as the biggest and most important task we have taken. A happy and harmonious family is bound to be the most precious jewels in our whole life.

Sunday, April 7, 2013

Reading Response~anything #3


Death of a Salesmam
By Arthur Miller


In Death of a Salesman by Arthur Miller, the protagonist Willy Loman is a salesman, and he has been out of luck all his life but always dreams that his two sons, Biff and Happy, may become successful business men. The reality is that Biff has never had a decent job and Happy is a playboy. One day, when the two sons finally decide to start a business under the encouragement of their mother, Linda, they plan to meet at a restaurant with Willy to discuss their business plan in the evening. Unfortunately, after having worked for a company for 35 years, poor Willy is fired in the morning of the same day.  When he walks into the restaurant with the expectation of getting some good news from the sons, he hears that Biff not only failed to borrow the capital from his old boss, Oliver, to start their imaginary business, he stole Oliver’s valuable fountain pen because Biff has been a chronic thief since he was young. The hopeless old Willy is really disappointed with all of the things that are happening to him.  So he decides to end his life by staging an intentional car crash, leaving his family members and friend, Charley, in great sorrow.


I think the book tells us about three main themes:

The first one is the American Dream----It tells us that Willy Loman has options. He has a lot of opportunities. Arthur Miller seems to be criticizing the American Dream, claiming that Corporate America drains the life out of people and casts them away when they are no further use. Yet, Willy Loman’s successful neighbor continually offers him a job! Willy Loman declines the job without ever explaining why. He has a chance to pursue a new life, but he won't let himself give up his old, soured dreams. Instead of taking the decent paying job, he chooses suicide. Arthur Miller would claim that the dysfunctional values of American society killed him. However, I believe that Willy Loman suffered from senility. He exhibits many of the symptoms of Alzheimer’s. 

The second one is abandonment. There is constant abandonment in the play. Willy's father leaves him and Ben when they are very young with no money. Ben departs for Alaska, abandoning Willy after Willy declines the offer to go with him. Biff abandons Willy after discovering his adultery. Happy abandons his deluded father in the washroom in a restaurant at his hour of need so that he can impress a lady.

The third one is betrayal. Willy believes Biff to have betrayed his ambitions for him. Willy has an affair and betrays his wife's love. Biff feels that Willy has betrayed him with his lies of personal attractiveness.

Personally, I feel that Death of a Salesman is a very well written play, an intelligent criticism of the American dream that effectively uses many respected literary devices. Although there is no suspense in the play, the end is concern-provoking.  All in all, I feel like reading this play. My life has been influenced by the book.