Paragraph 1: Introduction
Lead: In, “Romeo and Juliet” by William Shakespeare,
two young cross-star lovers experience through a lot of things that in the end
ended their lives.
Thesis: Romeo’s spontaneous lead to Juliet and his
tragic death.
Paragraph 2: Romeo marry Juliet not caring about
anything else
Ex: “These violent delights have violent ends”(Act 2, sc.5) – Friar
Lawrence tried telling Romeo to reconsider this marriage, but apparently Romeo
did not care because he is too in love with Juliet.
Ex: “Ah,
Juliet, if the measure of thy joy/Be heap'd like mine and that thy skill
be more…” (Act 2, sc.5) – Romeo really loves Juliet by
saying that she is his joy and that she is his happiness.
Paragraph 3: Romeo killed Tybalt as a result of
Mercutio’s death.
Ex:
“O, I am Fortune’s fool!” (Act 3, sc.1) – Romeo feels foolish because he had
kill Juliet’s cousin.
Ex:
“Staying for thine to keep him company/Either
thou, or I, or both, must go with him.”(Act 3, sc1)- Romeo is really angry
at Tybalt for killing Mercutio and he wanted him to die.
Paragraph 4: Romeo dies for Juliet without thinking
that Juliet will eventually wake up after 48hrs.
Ex:
“Then I defy you, stars” (Act 5,
sc.1) – Romeo feels sad to find that Juliet is dead and commit suicide himself.
Ex: “Well,
Juliet, I will lie with thee tonight” (Act 5, sc.1) – Romeo is going to
kill himself, because he doesn’t want to live if Juliet is not alive.
Paragraph 5: Conclusion
Restate Thesis: Romeo’s
spontaneous lead to Juliet and his tragic death.
-If
Romeo had thought about things before he do them, maybe Mercutio and Tybalt
wouldn’t die
-
If Romeo had listen to Fiar Lawrence, then maybe Juliet wouldn’t have to fake
die and then ended up “real dying”
-If
Romeo had waited for Fiar Lawrence to come and brought him the news that Juliet
is fake dying, Romeo wouldn’t have to real die and Juliet wouldn’t either.
